any thoughts on my new song?

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An intro with percussion based on snorting from a mirror?
Sounds like a draft for a Sgt Pepper's song created with the assistance artificial perceptual enhancement by the fellows hired to rattling things in the kitchen cupboard.
I had a bass that sounded like that in 1974. It needed strings rather than vermicelli.
I think you showed me. Now I need to look away for a while.
When do we get the photograph or you & the vintage gear (I don't mean the day old hallucinogens either)?
 
i wish i had someone lay down some drums for the track! i dont like my drums!
 
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JordanD said:
its catchy!
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Yes, in the way that one catches Syphilis or Typhoid fever.

Man, I can't figure you out. A simple, "my stuff is waaaaaay out there and isn't intended to appeal to the masses" would save a lot of aggravation for you here. In the spirit of giving technical feedback, you have almost too many issues to know where to start. I dunno, maybe that's intentional. :(
 
JordanD said:
forget that last song. heres a new one i just made, its awesome!
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You do that every time. Believe me, we try to forget the last ones, and the next one's are always just as bad, if not worse. If you're so convinced they're "awesome", why are you wasting our time with them. According to EVERYONE, your noise sucks beyond belief....and you're retarded.
 
rayc said:
An intro with percussion based on snorting from a mirror?
Sounds like a draft for a Sgt Pepper's song created with the assistance artificial perceptual enhancement by the fellows hired to rattling things in the kitchen cupboard.
I had a bass that sounded like that in 1974. It needed strings rather than vermicelli.
I think you showed me. Now I need to look away for a while.
When do we get the photograph or you & the vintage gear (I don't mean the day old hallucinogens either)?
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After reading this post, I'm afraid to even listen to the song. Jordan turned Ray's brain to mush. "the assistance artificial perceptual enhancement by the fellows hired to rattling things in the kitchen cupboard" AAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Thats bad trip talk. My mouth is eating my face! AAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh.
 
at least...

when he reposted the don't want to fall in love again crap it wasn't a demo off of a casio keyboard:) That being said I think the Casio demo sounded better :cool:
 
....although one cannot discard the entertainment value of Jordan's "works" :D

Jordan, please, for your own sake......I think you're a good kid and all but, seriously, GET REAL. Stop living in a bubble and if you really want to get into Homerecording, start from scratch and do it right. I'm sorry that you're a lonely guy craving attention, but this isn't the right way to get it. You're just making a fool of yourself this way.
 
If I were on a terrible acid trip this is what i would hear.

Fortunately I have been imbibing God's most gracious gift to man so I know that this is rubbish.

But I give you max points for originality!
 
Well Jordan, there is one thing about your song
that is Incredible...........................................People from Ireland, Australia, Germany, England, Canada, Rio de Janeiro, California, Missouri, Da Burg, and Omaha...............................All find your music Incredibly BAD!!!!!!:mad:...........................................................................Oh, add Illinois to that list too!!;)
 
....on the other hand, we can learn a lot from Jordan....
namely, how NOT to do it! :cool::p
 
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