Any fam care to hop on this beat with me?

  • Thread starter Thread starter Noddy301
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I like the original better. Screwing the beat takes a lot of the important elements out of it (making it harder to hear) like the clock ticking.

I wrote a verse spoken faster that fits to this beat perfectly (like Bone). Funny thing is I wrote the verse two weeks ago (a while before Noddy even did the beat). I just changed the last bar of it to fit the beat....if you wanna see it here it is.


Post up at the corner - I got a lil' money but I ain't got a job or nothin'
And the real of the situation is - I'm a hustla - muthafucka
Make money by any means necessary - sometimes it's scary
They gonna laugh at you Carrie - that's why they be dead an' buried
In a cemetery - the lesson to learn - don't fuck with the hustle
I came up quick when you struggle - so ya'll know I done hired some muscle
To protect me an' my assets - quick to bust automatics
Any static - an' bullets'll probably enter that ass like faggots
It could be drastic - but I'm all about my business - keep gettin' that paper
I'll be shootin' them dice in the alley or I'm goin' to pull off a caper
On some haters - give a fuck about 'em - I'll give 'em a reason to hate me
Stealin' shit outta they houses - sell all the product - money I'm makin
Go in small amounts to the bank accounts - money launderin' schemes
Will fulfill all my hopes an' dreams - just for doin' these scandalous deeds
Indeed - I'm knowin' bad karma be comin' right back to get me
Only got one shot to make it - better hurry though - time is tickin'
 
Wow! I'm not an emcee but I know heat when I "see" it...I wonder how you would come about putting a complimentary hook together
 
Noddy301 said:
Wow! I'm not an emcee but I know heat when I "see" it...I wonder how you would come about putting a complimentary hook together
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Usually takes a LOT longer for me to form the hook than the whole verse because I think the hook has to be the catchiest part of the whole track and it has to stand out separately from the verses.
 
thats funny cuz i can write hooks but i can't write ryhmes haha but for real tho this track is fine like it is so we can work on another track noddy
 
Noddy301 said:
Ok so heres the deal fam I arranged the beat in to song format. It comes off the bat wit a part for a hook then room for a 16, hook, one more 16, hook, room for 18 or 20, and then 2 hooks to end it off.....but heres the catch I have 2 versions of it...I need to know which one yall are feeling the most so I can send it out to you guys...I envisioned Gully, Fiev, and Fyre on it thats why its so long

KILL TIME
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5146515&q=hi

KILL TIME *PITCH DOWN*
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5152259&q=hi
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Homeboy, go with the KILL TIME one, the pitch down is cool but I prefer th eother one. All I can say is that's a hot beat bruh, definitely. I'd love to spit on that, but it looks like you got it all covered. Plus, I aint good enough.

Keep it real.

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