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lancelot0888
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So here is my another cover "I'll be" 
Please help me to improve!!
Please help me to improve!!
Mr Clean
AKA Teddy Wong
Dude, sorry but here's that age old reply. Sort your guitar out, it sounds awful. Honestly.
I couldn't listen to a lot of it because the guitar made my ears go funny, so I can't really comment on your vocals.
I couldn't listen to a lot of it because the guitar made my ears go funny, so I can't really comment on your vocals.
fritsthegirl
Taste of home
So, what have you learned and improved on so far by posting something every few weeks? I'm just asking rhetorically. You ask for help to improve but after 3 or so posts where people have advised you to sort your guitar out, it still sounds bad. You need to figure out what it should sound like. Pronto.
And just post one song in the mixing clinic, no need to post it anywhere else, we'll see it.
And just post one song in the mixing clinic, no need to post it anywhere else, we'll see it.
guitaristic
prophet of Dave
^^^what they both said, plus you are still straining your voice hard in trying to sound like the original artist. It literally sounds like you're....nevermind I'm not even going to say. It's just too forced.
Not that you will actually read or take this comment into consideration, since you're just harvesting hits.
Not that you will actually read or take this comment into consideration, since you're just harvesting hits.
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Morodiene
New member
+1 to all comments. I'm not going to listen, because I've given advice and I'm pretty sure has not been taken. Pearls to swine.
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lancelot0888
New member
Im sorry guys! I am not trying to spam the forum, I just wanted feedbacks. Of course I am "taking your comments into consideration". I will do better next time and take time to experiment with mic placements for my acoustic guitar, sorry.
Mr Clean
AKA Teddy Wong
I think tuning and set up will help you more than mic placement at this stage.
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trb94
New member
All the comments so far are true. Avoid "chewing" your r's. That's typically more of classical musician advice, but I think it applies here.
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Kidfixer
New member
From a vocalist standpoint, I'm hearing a lot of pitch problems. You're flat and out of key. I found myself literally cringing during the chorus. If you're playing guitar while singing, STOP. Pre-record you guitar track so you can concentrate on your vocal performance.
As far as the mix...no clue, not my area of expertise.
As far as the mix...no clue, not my area of expertise.
