yeah.. but the drum programming seemed kinda on some 'uppers' too.
shoot...I'd go with what you think, most important (which I'm sure you do anyway), and move on with the track and sell it if the price is right. You've got a decent enough sound, but is that for sale too...or just the song?
To be blunt honest, I think you're asking a group of people here who in general don't care too much for this genre, and are below your recording abilities in addition. You're the boss in this case, and I think you're going to get responses ranging from A to Z.
I'd push for the sale, and move on. This song's been around to long on the burner to keep fiddling with. You should have 15 songs by now, if this is a serious situation with Amy and you.
maybe I'm too uninformed to be making these statements, but those are my initial reactions.