Am I improving?

  • Thread starter Thread starter pkmusic
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I haven't heard your other work as I am kind of new to this board, but I thought it sounded good. It's not really my type of music, but I think you did a good job putting that piece together. It gets a little slow for a while, but I like the change up at the late middle part of the song. It's a nice break.
 
this is pretty cool. the only complaint is that it sounds too digital for my ears. maybe add some dirtier sounding samples at a couple parts. the snare kind of gets lost in the mix sometimes.

47ronin
 
Sound is good it just needs reverb. A little to repetitious for my taste. You could maybe try adding more than two chord changes and a melody? :o
 
this is cool - I like the banging toms
I found no fault with the mix, but then I'm no expert.
I especially liked the little melodic break near the end - maybe this could happen once more near the start of the track to break it up?
very cool tho - is it to standalone or to put vocals/rhymes over the top?
 
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