If that clip were your audition I wouldn't give you the job.
You sound hesitant, quiet, and slightly mumbly. You are doing a good job keeping that root note, but your high and low notes away from that root note are all out.
Your vibrato is very fast and tremulous. You should be able to do that, too, but you should learn to control your chest voice. Your chest voice is the one that's way too loud for the shower and the car and all the places you practice singing - I want to hear your chest voice.
You are in the right place. The answer to your question is: "I don't know, can we hear you sing like you really mean it please"?