Rokket
Trailing Behind Again
I posted my song "Leona" awhile back. Anybody that has been on my threads knows the background, but for those who don't, it about my grandmother's death. I received a lot of good, positive feedback on the song itself, and surprisingly, good vibes on the mix . The most common feedback I got when I posted it to the songwriter's forum was that it needed lyrics. After some personal soul searching, I wrote some lyrics and recut the song with the lyrics on it. I need some feedback as to whether it's good as a song, and some help to get it up to specs. First off, I know the mix on this isn't as good as it should be, because I didn't take the time to get it perfect (and that will show), but I need an overall impression on how it will work as a song. Be very critical of the last bridge before the last chorus. It wrote it as a throw-in, and I don't like it. Please try to get past my voice, I know it sucks, and so do the vocal harmonies. I am going to try and enlist some decent singers and redo that part. Please just check it out and make suggestions on what to do with it. Thanks. And by the way, you can't hurt my feelings, so be brutal if you must. Here is the link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/krystalcobramusic.htm
Eddie
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/krystalcobramusic.htm
Eddie