Acoustic Song.. comments?

[drumminsnowman]

Heres a sample of an acoustic song i recorded... how does it sound?
Game Over

...i am a fan of reverb, so you might say its too reverby, but i kinda like it.. live-ish feel.

 

[dmc777]

I think you've got the wrong link.

 

[drumminsnowman]

no it works... idk, i have no fricken clue as to post a link correctly, cuz everytime i use that button to create a hyperlink it does nothing, and u have to copy the address in the adressbar.
well heres the address if u dont mind copying it

 

[shackrock]

yeah that' wierd the link isn't working when i click it, but if i copy it,it does work. i think the forum has somethin messed up. ha.

anyway,

a - you shoulda posted this in the mp3 mixing clinic (for future reference).
b - yeah, too much vocal reverb...ha
c - guitar sounds really compressed or something....back up on that a bit i'd say
d - wierd chorusy/flange/maybe phase problem on the last "game over."

 

[MichiganMan]

Boy, I really enjoy your voice.