Well man, that's a download link, not a stream...anyway. I'm at work on computer speakers so...take with a grain of salt.
Sounds pretty good man, fairly clear and all. Sometimes though, the snare hit is almost lost when the distorted guitar kicks in. The ride/hi-hat is a little bright in the mix for me. But really overall, I think it's pretty good. Oh yeah, some of the mid/upper bass lines tend to fade away a little into the mix too. But I think all of that stuff could be just a preference thing. Good job though man!