cello_pudding
Well-known member
i haven't been on here for a while due to: having no internet, having no recording equipment, having a broken guitar, ....but i would like to know honest opinions on a new song.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20Dy6WTDAPA
lyrics:
at her feet attention thrown
a selfish want from men half grown
looks that shook and words that tattered
now beauty stolen, beauty scattered
from it to thou and prompted care
down trod my head, upshot a prayer
don't let her lips refract nor shade
me from the light of what they might say
don't let her hands' warmth move mine to live
lest i forget the help they'd give
don't let her eyes distract my own
then i the blind play pretend alone
i thank you Lord, i thank you Lord
for all that you give
she fills me with an air that cleanses and dulls me of my earthen senses.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20Dy6WTDAPA
lyrics:
at her feet attention thrown
a selfish want from men half grown
looks that shook and words that tattered
now beauty stolen, beauty scattered
from it to thou and prompted care
down trod my head, upshot a prayer
don't let her lips refract nor shade
me from the light of what they might say
don't let her hands' warmth move mine to live
lest i forget the help they'd give
don't let her eyes distract my own
then i the blind play pretend alone
i thank you Lord, i thank you Lord
for all that you give
she fills me with an air that cleanses and dulls me of my earthen senses.