Boy this is a hard one to judge. What a wonderful song. It has such a magical quality, that I want to check all my mixing instincts. I worry that as soon as you start applying all the various mixing suggestions I would make, that the track would lose its magic as it got polished.
Gosh I'd love to be mixing this one.
Thoughts:
-Acoustic sounds great
-Lead vocal is wonderful. Nice tone, good level. Great voice.
-Background vocals are delightful
-Bass sounds flabby. Give it some punch and clarity to drive the track.
-Don't love the snare when it first comes in, but love it at 1:42 forward. What changed? Feels like it needs a bigger reverb send until 1:42.
-Rhythm work starting at 1:42 could be fattened up, and spread much wider to give the track a sense of opening up
-I don't like the fuzzy rhythm guitar at 1:57, it's distracting from an otherwise beautiful ambiance
-Grand dynamic change from start of song til the end is refreshing
This song takes me on a magical journey and I worry that too much mixing attention will chip away at that. I would approach the mix with a cautious, delicate hand.
Thanks so much for sharing this with us.