A song about night...any feedback?

  • Thread starter Thread starter AaronGeorge
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Good effort and I can see where you want to take this song.

I think vocals should drop down into the mix, they are a little too far forward. Or maybe rather bring up the supporting tracks some... pads, guitar, etc... but not by much. I think also there are some parts where the vocal can benefit from double tracking. Sing the same part again as close to the original as you can possibly make it. It adds depth and texture.
 
very nice,like chili i see where your coming from ... good writing,phrasing .. nice feel and hooky


Like your other stuff to :)
 
I thought it sounded pretty good. the mix had a solid low end. I liked the ambient effects.

I didn't care for the guitar tone. It sounded kind of "cold and sterile."

I hear a couple out of tune bass notes. not sure if it was just me.
 
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