A Rap Masterpiece

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Everybody who knows me knows I release some eclectic music, (French Toast) hehe. Here's a song for you to preview, and here's what I would like feedback on:

1. Clarity of lyrics
2. Volume of each track
3. overall sound
4. title suggestions
5. any other comments.

As with everything, any help is greatly appreciated and supported with much love from this liberal democrat. Thanks a million.

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I LOVE YOU ALL!!!!!
 
Docaroo said:
That is the best rap I've heard in years!
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:eek: NO!!! You did not go there!!! :eek:

Now for my thoughts:

1) Levels sound great
2) I would more add reverb (Hall or Chamber) to the synths and strings to help make it a fuller sound.
3) Title suggestion: Kinetic-Phonetic :o
 
1. Clarity of lyrics - Not bad... could use more annunciation in the recording phase
2. Volume of each track - Maybe a bit more vocals, a HAIR less bass, and I agree with the 'more reverb effect' comment above.
3. overall sound - I like it, but I don't LOVE it.
4. title suggestions - "What will you get" sounds like the topic of your hook
5. any other comments. - The looping vocals in the beginning get weird a little, but maybe that's what you were going for. I'd take out the cheesy 80's techno snare in the beginning. Funny background sounds! :-)

Keep it up! Sounds like it has some great potential!
 
I will add some reverb on the strings, leave the snare for a cheese effect, and take the kinetic-phoenetic suggestion, of course giving credit. what's you first and last name fishmed?

PS. danny, did you mean less bass as far as the drumline, and what are the looping vocals?

Thanks for your input everybody.
 
The intro is liable to cause listeners to drop off.
With the exception of the BEATS it's pretty good.
you need a PRODEWSAH to give you some beats that aren't liable to edge on the side of satire.
 
Nice strings and piano tracks. The low mids of the vocals are fighting for space with the low pulsing drumbeat, though it's better with the vocal that comes in at 2:30. Vox are very midrangy, lacking in the 3 -7 kHz range... sounds like they're compressed in a way that's causing that and removing their transient attacks, and that reduces the articulation.

Tim
 
Rock Star 87 said:
I will add some reverb on the strings, leave the snare for a cheese effect, and take the kinetic-phoenetic suggestion, of course giving credit. what's you first and last name fishmed?

PS. danny, did you mean less bass as far as the drumline, and what are the looping vocals?

Thanks for your input everybody.
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I meant a little less bass in the bassline itself, thats just my opinion though.

And the looping vocals in the beginnig where you can't understand what's being said because everything is looping over itself. I agree with the comment that some listeners might lose interest during that part.
 
not to be a big bag of douche, but

1. What looping vocals?
2. What is a vox. (what a newb question)
 
Ok it's either a loop or a REALLY delayed echo. A loop is when something plays over and over again automatically even though you're not inputing a signal. Example: You sing something once, and it repeats, repeats, and repeats without you physically singing it. So when you start with the lyrics, "You say techs I say technology, mind strings, a piano, and drum machine" then it starts repeating itself at "mind strings", then the next section repeats itself, and it continues on until everything blurs together and you can't understand any of the lyrics.
 
ill have to take another listen, but I don't think I engineered it to loop at all.
 
i'm re-uploading it, there shouldn't have been looping vocals, so check again in about 45 mins.
 
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