A mix of mine open to criticism

[TerraMortim]

Hello, although I've posted here quite a bit, this is the first post I've had in here. I'd love to know what comments people have for the song "crimson lust" at www.terramortim.net.

thanks!

 

[elcholo]

definitely not my cup of tea, but here goes: (listening as I go)

good groove to it. Dark feel...I like the arpeggio'd beginning...

* kick comes in just right!
* Can't hear a word your sayin' mate...
* good crunching guitar riff. nice.
* 1:35 - still haven't heard a discernible word..
* breakdown at 3min mark is cool, but confuses the crud out of me time wise.

not bad, only nit i have is not being able to hear the lyrics.

cholo

 

[Rokket]

God I frikken hate myspace.


http://www.lightningmp3.com


Use this, so I can download your stuff and listen to it. My internet connection is a cat's ass, so I can't stream shit.

 

[TerraMortim]

definitely not my cup of tea, but here goes: (listening as I go)

good groove to it. Dark feel...I like the arpeggio'd beginning...

* kick comes in just right!
* Can't hear a word your sayin' mate...
* good crunching guitar riff. nice.
* 1:35 - still haven't heard a discernible word..
* breakdown at 3min mark is cool, but confuses the crud out of me time wise.

not bad, only nit i have is not being able to hear the lyrics.

cholo

Cool, thanks for the input. Do you have any suggestions to clear up the lyrics at all?

 

[TerraMortim]

God I frikken hate myspace.


http://www.lightningmp3.com


Use this, so I can download your stuff and listen to it. My internet connection is a cat's ass, so I can't stream shit.

k. I tried that site but got an error so I'll up it to mediafire and give the link. It's still a 128kbps mp3 so that of course will kind of suck... but *sigh* that's what myspace wants.

http://www.mediafire.com/?9cqn1nbmvyx

There she blows.