2nd written/recorded song, please review

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I like the rhythm guitar sound you have - what kind of guitar/amp are you using. I would bring the lead up a bit/rhythm down a bit on the first lead bit (the low key one). Other than that tiny thing the mix is fine. Good singing - gets stronger as the song goes along. This is a well written song with lots of changes and interesting parts. Nice variety of lead guitar sounds....Cool :cool:
 
ido1957 said:
I like the rhythm guitar sound you have - what kind of guitar/amp are you using. I would bring the lead up a bit/rhythm down a bit on the first lead bit (the low key one). Other than that tiny thing the mix is fine. Good singing - gets stronger as the song goes along. This is a well written song with lots of changes and interesting parts. Nice variety of lead guitar sounds....Cool :cool:
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Thanks for the comments. This is not the final version. I am just trying to get an overall opinion befoer I do a final recording. I wrote and recorded this in about 3 hours so it still needs alot of work, like the drum line for instance. I think a agree with your view on the first lead solo. I was even thing about taking out the low guitar totally during this. I wish I had a better voice, but, this is what god has given me to work with so I can only do the best I can.

The guitar was done through my ZOOM g2 pedal that I got for christmas. I LOVE IT, great pedel for 100 bucks. I just plug it directly into my mixer.

Again, feedback please. Thanks
 
Also I know the middle of the song gets a little boring. Any suggestions on how th juice it up?
 
It's a cool tune. I like the drums, they drive the tune well. It sounds mono though, as if everything's right up the middle. If you spread the guitars out a bit, it would make room for everything. But there's not much to change arrangement-wise, it's a good tune.
 
RAMI said:
It's a cool tune. I like the drums, they drive the tune well. It sounds mono though, as if everything's right up the middle. If you spread the guitars out a bit, it would make room for everything. But there's not much to change arrangement-wise, it's a good tune.
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So should I pan guitars some to the left and right or should I just widen the whole sound of he song?
 
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