2 of my songs at soundclick

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wow. what a cacaphony of sound! People in this forum are RECORDING GEEKS....If you're not happy with the "recording" of it, my suggestion is don't post it. Otherwise you are looking for song and musician critique! Recording engineers are not crazy about reviewing songs for musical critique....in fact, they've been "trained" to not say negative things about songs or musicianship.
Some of us here are musicians...we will gladly respond. Yes..the recording of it really sucks...don't post stuff that sounds this bad...ok...now...your song idea was cool....too bad you don't have friends you can write songs with..you could use anothr perspective to your ideas......you need development as far as song structure and maturation of ideas so that they come together to make a stronger song. I won't go into the musianship of it all.....very immature playing....however...that descending line you play on acoustic guitar throughout the song was very cool...a gr8 idea that could be something if you work on it...it goes ok with the acoustic power chords too....watch your singing man....listen back to your vocals and try to sing better in spots that you hear are weak.
 
I agree with firesole. You definitely have a great idea on that second song. Just work on polishing it, and developing a sound for it. Your rythm and timing could use some adjustment, but keep working on it. I would definitely like to hear that second song again after its been cleaned up and developed. Consider taking it in some different directions.
 
Thanks

many thanks to u guys damn that was a lot of info i could learn and that will help me make these songs better thanks for listening guys ill be working on my sinigng most definately lolol thanks for listening
peace out
 
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