2 new tracks - any feedback appreciated

[keenan336]

I've recently finished two new tracks, just curious as to see what kind of critiquing it gets from you guys. everything's done with an aardvark 20/20, cakewalk pro audio, fruity loops studio, a behringer condensor, and several low-class dynamic mics:

http://www.purevolume.com/declanswell

the tracks "fascination" and "existentialism on prom night" are the newer ones.

any feedback is awesome.

 

[Halion]

Talking creative quality, they're pretty good

You need to get some (better) vocals bad.

Sound a bit too "midi", and I'm not talking about the synth lines. You can clearly hear that, for instance, the strings are from a library and are playing in with a keyboard, and then never touched again (mess with your attack and release a bit). The piano gives me the same feeling.

The balance across the frequency spectrum and stereo image is good, to very good.