2 new songs to critique

[Strat Man]

'An Ease' & 'Fun Free' - www.audiox.cjb.net/v2.html

Please post all comments here.
I am aware that the recording quality is not of a particularly high standard, both were done in a day without my usual attention to detail but still give a good enougth impression of the songs to critique properly. This is not to say the recording is crap though!

Cheers,
Neill

 

[HogansHiro]

Start Man, I couldn't get more than 4 seconds to stream from your sight. I tried a couple different times.

 

[Strat Man]

Try saving them - if on pc:
Right Click and then click 'Save Target As' and save them where you want them eg Desktop.

 

[fprod south]

I really like your style. Your writing, playing, and singing are all very cool. Has sort of a authentically spooky Roky Erickson sound to it.

I'm not crazy about the dirty guitar tones though. It sounds very digital to me. I think a much more vintage amp tone would fit your song style much better. The bass could also benefit from some subtractive eq (or whatever the correct term is) to make it less muddy and some compression to even it out.

But keep it up. You've got some very cool stuff.

 

[W.I.S.C.]

An Ease-Good ideas but ya gotta get that metronome out.Tha lack of timing kinda bothers me.Build a drum track for this.Give it punch by another guitar comin in at the chorus.This is a good basic idea,go with it and put some production time in there.There was a comment about the guitar sound so I won't rehash.Your vox could use a little more effort, too.Like you could scream but your whispering loudly.It works for the verse but when the chorus comes I was expecting the rest of the HEAVINESS to come thru.Get some drums in there or do it to a metronome so that maybe another member could do some drums,just an idea.Cool song with much potential.