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Im at work, so just postin these to save em somewhere.. Theres birds outside that don't feel like me, chirpin and hootin, they know their right place. theres a sunset off on the horizon, its going down, and will come back around with or without me. thats the idea i wanna convey... need to...

Hey, thanks a lot Gecko, always appreciate your input! I think I am in agreement with your criticism. The sunset and the birds part came from a story he was saying, about how he was all alone driving, and got out of his car because he heard birds chirping, and saw a sunset that he just found...

These were inspired by a pretty depressing topic on a social forum. The topic was about how the TC wanted to commit suicide. He said it wasnt because he was depressed or had any family or relationship troubles, but because he just really didnt feel at peace with the world, he kept saying how...

hey, toms sound really good! The snare definately has that rock n roll sound, so if thats what your goin for, I think your off to a good start. I personally like my snare to have a bit more of an open sound, with a little bit more ring, but drum tuning is so personal, gotta just find what you...

cmon now, is it that bad?? haha

Sam Beam (Iron and Wine) Connor Oberst (Bright Eyes) Neil Young The Shins Jeff Mangum (Neutral Milk Hotel) of course, many many more

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Jojo Mayer inspired, although not even close to what that guy can do :D

Let me know what you think, tips are appreciated! http://www.mediafire.com/file/wg0wzyiklhz/Drum n Bass.wav

Ive decided to make this topic the official place of all my lyrics, instead of making new topics all the time. As always, comments are appreciated! "Dodge the Sidewalk Cracks" Fix your hat and your hair, yawn a bit with a look of despair, stuck in a library, and you havenet learned to read...

ya, it is wind operated (from the sound of it, more like small-hurricane operated :D) But ya, pedals after the mic will probly work, or even effects after recording i suppose. I had a feeling that there wouldnt be a boatload of options, but if anyone has any other ideas, im willing to experiment

Im gonna take a stab at the meaning, because I feel there is one in these lyrics, and that it is not just directed at one person. From what I get, its about a short lived love, more about sex than anything. Obviously theres two people involved, one wanting it to be about more than a physical...

hahahaha $7 at Goodwill. Its one of those Magnus chord organs. I told myself that if there were any instruments in there that I could afford with the money in my pocket, Id buy it :D So, I was thinking of trying to modify it to make some cool noises with it. Is this at all possible? I was...

hey, thanks for the posts. It always helps to hear from other people! Helps me get my mind thinkin haha. I think that Im going to keep the crickets part. I like it, because it gives the feeling of being alone, just contemplating. Which is what I was kinda doing when I was writing this song...

I decided I really like this line: "As my heart sleeps beneath your snow while your winter is here" It took me a few reads through to fully grasp it, I didnt like it at first and was going to try to suggest something else, but then the meaning became clear to me. I love when this happens in...

Hey, If you're down for an outside lending hand, I would love to attempt some percussion on your piece! If so, send me the .wav at ajperram@mtu.edu I dont know about you, but I always prefer real instruments :D

This is a lot different than the other set of lyrics I posted, being more alternative/folk influenced as opposed to alternative/punk ( i guess... pft, labels..) I wrote this a while ago, and now after re-reading it, I wonder if it needs a chorus or not... Here it is: Just like a spidder, he...

Some great advice in this topic, has sparked some ideas for me, thanks!

Hey man, thanks a lot! It really means a lot.

Hey, thanks for the feedback, fellow yooper. I know... I get antzy, and I shouldnt, but its hard when theres 90 views and one response haha... they should just get rid of that view counter lol. Im really glad you said what you said about the first verse, seeing as I wrote this after (or maybe...