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Hey, that is a nice song. The only improvement I can think of is some kind of increased dynamics. I seem to hear too much "constantness" in volume/energy in HRs these days (including mine), which is probably a result of too much "automation" at our hands. It'd be nice to hear some fluctuation...

I'm voting for some kind of modern-day retro synth thing poking in there in a couple of places. Otherwise you'll end up with a guitar wall. As for the completely new song starting at 3:00 :eek: It's tough to judge when the whole song sounds exotic because of your cool language :) Good luck...

Man, great voice! I've never heard the original. This is a very choice recording. Love the high guitars. I listened to this coz I like mountains. And I also use only a shoe phone. (Actually that is a lie. I don't have ANY phone.) Thanks for the listen aspiring

Hi. This sounds like a big Neil Young kind-of thing. Cool. But like the others said, you need to bring the vocals up. And you need to work on that arrangement. Too many sonic holes. Spatially and temporally. Even then, it's still all a bit too epic-ish. But you could really do something...

I will listen :) That's a good effort to go record that whole album. I like the starting track the way it winds you up... Then I skipped to your recommended track. Your sounds are a bit metally for my normal liking. But loads of energy. And novel to my ears. I liked "Anticipating..."...

Hey there. When this starts, I really loved the intro. Then the song got weak when the drums and rest kicked in. Loads of great ideas there. I think you really need to sift through them all and work out what this song actually is going to be. ...I'm now at the end, and I love that too. So...

Docaroo. That's a great song. Sounds well mixed to me -- except that the vox could be a bit drowned by the gats. As for the song. Made me smile. I can't help thinking, however, that the content doesn't quite sit with the style. For me the content -- and melody actually -- is begging for a...

Well, here I am listening to The Morning Shows. Coz that's a great title. All sounds very well recorded. What do YOU think of this tune? Because it shows potential. But I'd echo the line "you've got to find your style". It sounds a bit lost. I'm sure you could do something with this. It...

Good stuff spider. I agree with the others about not hammering the vox FX too much, or at least in a similar way each time. And although your tunes are cool, they do all sound a bit the same-ish. If you want to go further, I'd say try to work on the music for a while -- forgetting about...

Great slide playing Steve. Is that SteveE thing playing on the other infamous (ex)country SteveE...? Hooked me anyway :) Of course this doesn't sound like the aforementioned, and his stuff is about as close to country as I've really been -- not very, that is. So I can't comment much. But...

Yowl Mush That certainly is a fun mix. Wonder if it will keep the island men happy. You know, I'm still voting for the original "energy" mix though. That's because it's early morning at work and I need some :) These days there just aren't enough songs with wild monkey screams in them. Have...

That's really nice jumpingflash. I think you've captured the mood perfectly. Great performance. The only possible "problem" was the plonky piano at 01:11. Sounded a tad too plonky for me. Pianist was a bit too enthusiastic at that point. But if it's too late then I could live with that...

You don't sound kiwi. You don't sound British. You sound North American. Mind you, I haven't been in New Zealand for some years. Maybe everyone there sounds like that now. The song is pretty rockin good. I too would prefer it with less metal sound. But hey, that's just me. Metal guitars...

Great voice on "Anything at All". The guitars swamp the mix though. You need to make them step back a bit and then have a listen to everything together. The song needs some tweaking of reverb and EQ to make all the instruments gel together a bit more. And it's great to hear some real drums...

3rd'ed. Almost like that guitar belongs on another planet to the rest of the song. Cool voice. Everything else sounds great. It's hard to say anything more till you fix that guitar :) ciao aspiring

Hey sane boy. You sound just like my friend Mike. Amazing! Checkout song "Oakridge" reclusefilmstar. You could be brothers! I like my friends stuff, so...same goes for yours :) If you rerecord this, maybe try and spice up the arrangement (just the drums even) so that the song "moves" a bit...

Hi Ray Great recording. As others have said it will only improve once you pan it around a bit. I wouldn't stress out too much about how exactly you do that. Just twirl around and see how it sounds. Try a few different versions. I reckon you could spend more energy instead getting a bit...

Hey yeah ...sia. that's a great song. You do just need to "sing it". And you know you can. Just do it! Later on in fact -- you do. The vocals get better as the song goes along. So just reherse that thing, fix it up, and post it back -- so I can keep a good version. cheers aspiring

Well, that certainly has plenty of meat and potatoes! Pretty wild. I didn't get bored. I had to listen to your next song "Perfect Romance" to see what you normally sound like coz I have nothing to compare this one too. And I have to say, I like "Romance" better. Probably an age thing...

Yeah. Hurry up and "make that call". aspiring