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  1. patlang12

    Need Some Fresh Ears on "Walk As One"

    You might want to check out the song Camilo by State Radio. It has a similar march thing going on. You might be able to use it as a reference to get the march sounding more how you want it.
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    Need Some Fresh Ears on "Walk As One"

    The song sounds good. I agree with Jeff about the bass drum. When the second guitar comes in the stereo mix is balanced, but it takes a while to come in and until that point the mix is noticeably unbalanced. As far as the marching at the end I think maybe a little more bass on the marching...
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    Any Suggestions to "Eternal Optimist"?

    I agree with what everyone else said about the words and breathing. My favorite part of the song was the guitar riff and vocals at the very end. I'd like to see those parts (at least the guitar riff) earlier in the song just because they are so catchy. Maybe you could work in that guitar riff...
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    Celtic Idea: Jimmy Jones

    I agree with Robert that it would be nice to have a little more of the drum, but except for that it sounds great. I love the guitar tone.
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    First Song in the Clinic

    I don't have much to add to what others already posted, but I really like this song.
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    Song: "Get it Up" Any Mix/EQ Suggestions?

    Hey Robert, good to hear a new song from you. Is Bag of Toys going to have a new album coming out soon? The mix sounds pretty balanced to me. The main thing that sticks out to me is the drums, which I know you will be replacing eventually, but I think that's the main thing thats holding this...
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    take a listen please?

    The composition of the song was really cool. I personally would lower the level of the synths just a little bit.
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    Captain Gipsy Jazz vs. Strange Scales

    I didn't think it was that out there, but I do like "strange" music. I enjoyed listening to it.
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    running multiple m-boxs

    So my only option would be to record on multiple m boxs on multiple computers and then bounce the tracks over to one computer and line them up?
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    running multiple m-boxs

    Through my school I have access to a bunch of m-boxs. I was wondering if there is a way to hook multiple m-boxs to one computer (to get more inputs) through some type of daisychain or something. My computer (mac book pro) only has one firewire input, but I might be able to get a hub. Thanks a...
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    What chords work for this track?

    Amaj7 works pretty well for the first chord. For the second one maybe a Fmin7, but I'm not sure I like that or not.
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    Ghost of New Orleans - any suggestions?

    I'm listening on headphones so I can't really comment on the mix, but I like the song a lot.
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    Tracked live in my house - No one else

    The guitars are pretty harsh. The drums sound good to me. The vocals sound really nice, but to me they seem obvious that they are overdubbed. I don't know how to describe it, they just seem to be coming from a different place than the rest of the music. All and all I'd say it sounds pretty...
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    The Cage In The Sky (my first song)

    The organ and slide guitar are a little too loud and distracting at the start of the song. I like how it starts to pick up speed and then stops and goes to the solo. I felt like the song just really started to pick up at the end and then it just ended. It seemed like everything was a big...
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    Original Song, Psycho Bitch From Hell

    I like the song. I'd say cut the gain a lot on the guitars and it would sound a lot better.
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    Please review this mix

    Everything sounds good to me except I'm not a big fan of the snare sound.
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    "Fever Dream" -- I guess it's 'indie'?

    I like this a lot. I agree with others that a real drummer would help a lot with this song.
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    "Fever Dream" -- I guess it's 'indie'?

    I like this a lot. I agree with others that a real drummer would help a lot with this song.
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    Junkie Whore - a Greg_L rock and/or roll original!

    It's catchy, I like it a lot.
  20. patlang12

    1965 Fender Jaguar...Excellent Condition

    Thats a nice looking guitar, I wish I could afford it.
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