Thanks for the imput I'm beginning to see the light. I'm slow but I get there.
Color and direction that's what it needs for sure. re-writes' in the future.
Thanks again for the help!!
Walktausha.
Well,let's see......"difficuty communicating what you're actually feeling" Waiting for love to come back in to a relationship and trying to regain that lost love is all through the song. I don't see the miss. Also "needs to be grounded", there's history in the fact that there was love there...
Hey thanks for all the good words !! I like the change that you suggested, "off to outerspace" fits and it's an easily sung improvement. Thanks again, guess this ones a keeper.
Walktausha.
I hope to get some feedback on these, am I putting too many out there or yall just don't like country music??? Let me know, I'm a full grow'd man. I can take it !!
Waiting For Your Love
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Waiting on your love to come back again...
Would you guys rate this for me say from one to ten so I'll know if I should keep working on it? It's up-beat country?, maybe southern rock?, not sure at this point. Thanks !!
Take Me To Your Leader
Well last night she said she's leavin', and I guess it's for the best
So I went down to a bar...
Thanks for all the input.......I guess sometimes I just get tired of the same old stuff and want to move on, but I have doubts about my abilities as a musician, being good enough to fit in somewhere else, and if my songs would be enough to keep me going on my own.
Thanks again for all the good...
Being the youngest in a band of Old-timers, they play the classic country stuff from the 50's and 60's, I do a few songs because they seem to like the vocals I do on Waylon and Merle stuff. To the point......the way I got in with these guys, I provide "for a fee" the sound system for their gigs...
Actually, at the end of the song if you recall what you just heard, it might come to you that she's dead now. So looking back "with " a (rear)( veiw) is a play on the wording. I agree with the image of the car......perhaps I should have written....I drove by ........instead of came by. At any...
Just wanted to get some feedback from the GP to help find a new direction.
Currently I'm with a group/band that has a majority of older guys in it. They play the old, old, old country stuff. Be it that I'm still in the learning process "guitar", trying to learn different styles ie:chet, willie...
Well since you said that, I thought I'd throw this one that I was working on to see what you thought. It's kinda ruff I know but I'm kinda stuck and maybe you guys can help me out........ no title no music yet.......just the words to another "country maybe"
BTW thanks for the response to the...
The part where is says " I remember her daddy callin' " refers to the " hiding in the barn " part. The rear veiw.....if you think about it. "I came by to take her for a ride" ( implies a car maybe), and the next leaving the cemetery looking back at a vision of her, maybe remembering the way she...
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Played in 3/4 time in the style of say..........Merle Haggard
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I guess I should close the window, The rain is blowing in
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