Crop Circles with Nick and Dave

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The bed is pretty good but the melody in verse one is really stilted - probably as a result of the metre and rhyming scheme but the discomfort is clear in the voice.
 
Really nice performances all round you guys. I agree the snare is a touch too loud as is the acoustic guitar riff at around 1:49, the guitar at 3:06 is a little clunky, but otherwise this is good work as usual.

Good separation too, I like the stereo spread.
 
...the metre and rhyming scheme...

good to see someone else recognizing how important those are, aside from the melody itself. I haven't heard anyone else refer to "metre" on this forum yet...nice to see.
 
I haven't heard all the mixes, but the latest one sounds good and tasteful. The only issue I hear is the vocal at times sounds too loud.
 
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