That first six seconds gives it a great live feel (sorry, Mike). Great vocals! Very Yes. The acoustics could be brought in just a touch...too wide...makes them distract from the scene. Cool solo! This is some great song, here! Very early prog.
There's a constant hiss. A bit of LF mud. Otherwise, great mix.
HI BROKEN,
yes, leaving that opening section was to introduce the listener directly to the vibe of the moment...
in that, the session was totally in the moment...
kind of off the cuff, un-rehearsed......
as far as panning, i like the panning as is,
i used a bunch of classic recordings (such as zep's going to california, csn&y's stuff, etc) and they did the hard panning...
i guess on the next version, i'll play with bringing them in more with some centered mono reverb, or something like that....
actually, the dry ambient tracks sound pretty cool on their own, maybe i'll bring the pan in like you say,
like at 50% and 50% left and right....
that may be separated enough with NO fx......
the hiss is just the ambience of the room, and the hotness of the mic...
i'm ok with the hiss, makes it a bit more organic, and less stuffy studio wise.....