the tone is pretty good. i would like to hear more of that lead guitar. the drums may have a tad too much in the highs in your overheads. i think the separation between the kick and the bass is well done. the snare does seem like it's separate from the cymbals, but it's not awful at all.
there's a lot of subjectivity in recording tone, just like a style of music. if you wanted to turn up the bass guitar, you could, but it's fine how it is. you could also turn it down. some people think if it's too clear, it will sound too commercial-ly and lacks soul, some people think if it's too muddy, it's not professional or sell-able.
i'm listening on behringer truths.
one thing i do when i take critique into consideration is listen to what the other people record. i'm way out there as far as style goes, but I took a lot of recording classes (music major - 8 years ago) in college and listened to and mixed different things then and since. listen to rayc's stuff and make your adjustments accordingly.