Lost Her

  • Thread starter Thread starter Irwin abrigo
  • Start date Start date
Irwin abrigo

Irwin abrigo

Active member
Lost Her
©2009 Irwin Byron Abrigo
-
(Chorus)
Lost her
I've lost her
I need her
but I let her go (let her go)
I love her
really love her
And it hurts to know
that I am losing her (I'm losing her)
-
(1st verse)
They thought I was the kind
To do things and hide
But they didn't know
my love was so true
She told me she love me
And wouldn't let me go
Don't mind - don't mind
what the world may say or do
-
(Pre Chorus)
But now she's not herself
She is someone else
I don't know
where we went wrong
-
(Chorus)
-
(2nd verse)
I was so kind
And she was friendly
Two young people in love
and so strong
Talking about the future
She said to me
True love - true love
will never die
-
(Pre Chorus)
But now she's not herself
She is someone else
I don't know
what change her mind
-
(Chorus)
-
(Bridge)
Magic moments we've had
Everything you answer yes
You leaving me was never in my thought
Oh can't you see how much it hurts


(Chorus)
 
Very difficult subject to write in a way that avoids a lot of cliché which basically leaves two options, write what you like and don't give it a thought, then execute it in an individual way. Or strive and find a uniqueness to the lyrical content. This looks like it will work as song, but very hard to get a feel for it in just the written form. It would be useful to know how the melody is composed to get a better idea.

All the best

Tim
 
Tim, I do have a melody idea in my head for this lyric and would like for you guys to hear it when ever I can. Thank you very much for your input.

Irwin
 
I look forward to hearing it. The lyrics you have will give a big opportunity to focus on a compelling delivery through the vocal performance. It's the factor with song writing which I think has a massive potential to make it memorable to the listener. Very easy when most of us are tinkering with the technicalities of recording to become torn between production and what it is that we want to share. Of course if one becomes well known through a couple of songs, an army of minions can be employed to worry about that side of things.

Tim
 
Why have you posted this irwin? Are you after feedback or you're just posting your lyrics for the hell of it?
 
Irwin, I like the lyrics overall. It would be good to match those with a melody. It's hard to infer the meter of the words without a melody, at least for me.

BTW, is the word 'love' in the line "She told me she love me" a typo? Is it supposed to be 'loved'?

Keep us posted on your progress. :)

Cheers,
Joseph
 
Joseph, I have the melody. You see, if I can get someone with a home studio to work with me I can have my songs heard faster to you guys.

P.S the word 'love' in the line "She told me she love me" is a typo It supposed to be 'loved'? Yes.
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top