Please check out new song-unfinished

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DogmaticVox said:
Good recording and performance. I would play with some of the stereo placement - the piano sounds fine on the far right, but as the song goes on I feel like my right ear is being pulled down. Why not try and move that guitar on the right? The one on the right is playing the solos and has more movement, get it out from under that piano and move it closer to off-center on the left or right so it can breathe more.

Your voice sounds fine, but you sound a little strange at the end when doing the "Whoa whoa whoa, yeah yeah yeahs", like you were trying to put some real feeling behind it but still tried to sing soft - like you were holding back. So it ends up sounding a little corny. But I could be totally wrong. haha
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Thanks for checking it out and the feedback. I've now added the drums and did some other junk and adjusted the mix a bit. I usually double everything and I recorded the piano in stereo, but I was sort of experimenting with trying to put in less and panning and I don't know. Anyway, I put both of the piano channels in so it's not quite so left heavy, and moved some of the guitar bits in or stereo depending.

Thanks a lot. Oh the corny vocal bits I left because, I don't know, I don't mind corny (I do like those corny Beatles) and I'm too lazy and sick of this song to do anything about it!
 
Just put up this up with the drums and some other minor changes.

We're All Insane

Thanks for any further feedback or insults or empty praise or whatever.
 
I love it and it is a song that I would listen to again and again.
 
I absolutely love this. Its brilliant! I take it you are in some sort of recording profession? its just amazing. Where can I download this?!
 
I love the Beetles, and this sounds pretty good, but the problem is it sounds too much like the Beetles. Nirvana and the Foo Fighters (same thing I guess) also like the Beetles, but found ways to progress.
 
TheAquired said:
I absolutely love this. Its brilliant! I take it you are in some sort of recording profession? its just amazing. Where can I download this?!
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Thanks very much. I'm just a home recording guy. I am thinking about doing an "album", or putting one together or whatever. Please sign up to my mailing list, and if I ever get that together I'll let you know!!

Thanks again, I really appreciate it.
 
Tobe said:
I love the Beetles, and this sounds pretty good, but the problem is it sounds too much like the Beetles. Nirvana and the Foo Fighters (same thing I guess) also like the Beetles, but found ways to progress.
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Yeah, I guess so. I think there's something about The Beatles, maybe because they are so well known, that this sort of thing seems like a problem. But I don't know, I kind of like doing stuff that is obviously influenced by them. And I don't like Nirvana and Foo Fighters at all. Maybe if they were more Beatley, I would.

But I don't think everything I do is too Beatley. I recently put up a track called Fuck That Shit Pt. 2, which was kind of 70s p-o-r-n influenced. That doesn't seem Beatley to me. Unfortunately, it was sort of a throw away piece of garbage.

Oh well, I just sort of do what I do with no rhyme or reason other than to kind of entertain myself. Guess that's why the Foo Fighters are huge and I'm just a guy home recording in my bedroom.
 
Greg_L said:
Amen to that. That's what it's all about.
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Exactly! Who cares what others think, if you doing it for you.

Obviously, opinions will surface, when you ask for opinions. But they are not your opinions, and you asked. :)
 
jimmys69 said:
Exactly! Who cares what others think, if you doing it for you.

Obviously, opinions will surface, when you ask for opinions. But they are not your opinions, and you asked. :)
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Right, you can't get mad when you ask for opinions and then get them. Lol. Well, you can get mad, but that's silly.
 
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