Finished?

[MicheleDaPila]

Hello Everybody!
I worked on this stuff all alone for months, now I really need any kind of feedback!
Thank you!

 

[RAMI]

Finished?

I don't know. Not sure how 1 minute clips can be considered "finished", but anyway.

I like the guitar sound and the riffs. The bass drum is non-existant on the first 2, and a little better on the third.

 

[MicheleDaPila]

I don't know. Not sure how 1 minute clips can be considered "finished", but anyway.

I like the guitar sound and the riffs. The bass drum is non-existant on the first 2, and a little better on the third.

Thank you for answer!
The tracks are just an "extract".
Maybe "non-existant" is a little eccessive...
Anyway, do you think it's just a matter of volume?

 

[RAMI]

Maybe "non-existant" is a little eccessive...
Anyway, do you think it's just a matter of volume?

Well, yes, I might be exaggerating a bit. But I really don't hear a kik drum in those first 2 clips. Probably just matter of volume, but it's hard to tell without hearing it.

I am really digging what I heard, though. Good rock, which is what I like.

 

[ido1957]

Short Clips to prevent copying I would imagine....
The first one sounds good - catchy and rockin'. The vocals are nice and strong so they suit the tune well.

 

[MicheleDaPila]

Well, yes, I might be exaggerating a bit. But I really don't hear a kik drum in those first 2 clips. Probably just matter of volume, but it's hard to tell without hearing it.

I am really digging what I heard, though. Good rock, which is what I like.

Thank you!
I think you're right about the kik drum... I will work on it!

 

[MicheleDaPila]

Short Clips to prevent copying I would imagine....
The first one sounds good - catchy and rockin'. The vocals are nice and strong so they suit the tune well.

Thank you!