Nice panning on the overheads? The rolls are quite "moving". What kind of guitar chain are you recording here?
Vocals - The telephone effect is good but there is a big difference between the vocal sounds. The "regular" vocal sounds "dry" or something. I have no idea what I would do to change it it's just my impression when listening. I'll try and think of some other tunes that have the different vocals and see if anything comes from that. I'm thinking Beatles - Lucy in the Sky or something like that....where the vocals differ but are not as different....
Other than that the recording is good for me...