Lemontree's colaboration thread...I need your help!

LemonTree

LemonTree

Suck 'em and see!
ok, I have this song I wrote about 20 years ago. It was once recorded with a really bad band I was in about 16 years ago...just a live demo, pretty poor.

Anyway, I've retracked the whole song, I played bass on the original...and everything everything on this one. The drums are just a rough outline, actualy everything is at this point......

My guitaring sucks and I can't sing. I need a solo at the 3:40 mark but any aditional guitars are welcome. If you want to sing it you can do it in any style you like. I just wanna see where this one goes.....

here's the lyrics...

The face I give you
Is always the same
threatned by fear
blinded by gain
be under no illusion
feel the pain
we're all in the picture
we're all in the game

This place I take you
is misery and pain
shelter from the sun
hide from the rain
mass of unemployment
faces show the strain
we're all in the picture
we're all in the game

everything I give to you
everything I need from you
everything I want from you
everything you know is true
everything I give to you
everything I need from you
everything I want from you
everything you know is true

If I could give you a whole new world
to see the stars this night
I'd take away your fears tomorrow
and fill your heart's delight

the love you give me
drives me insane
throw away the key
and feel no pain
flashes in my mind
engraved in my brain
we're all in the picture
we're all in the game

everything I give to you
everything I need from you
everything I want from you
everything you know is true
everything I give to you
everything I need from you
everything I want from you
everything you know is true


The face I give you
Is always the same
threatned by fear
blinded by gain
be under no illusion
feel the pain
we're all in the picture
we're all in the game

we're all in the picture
we're all in the game
we're all in the picture
we're all in the game

Here's the music I have so far DECEPTION


I managed to dig up the original for a vocal guide .. HERE This is just for time guides, you can sing any style or melody you want to it.

So, who's in?

I have everything on seperate tracks so I can bounce you a mix of whatever you need like drums n bass line for the guitarists, vocalists should get by with what's already there.

Let's make some music!
 
LemonTree said:
ok, I have this song I wrote about 20 years ago. It was once recorded with a really bad band I was in about 16 years ago...just a live demo, pretty poor.

Anyway, I've retracked the whole song, I played bass on the original...and everything everything on this one. The drums are just a rough outline, actualy everything is at this point......

My guitaring sucks and I can't sing. I need a solo at the 3:40 mark but any aditional guitars are welcome. If you want to sing it you can do it in any style you like. I just wanna see where this one goes.....

here's the lyrics...

The face I give you
Is always the same
threatned by fear
blinded by gain
be under no illusion
feel the pain
we're all in the picture
we're all in the game

This place I take you
is misery and pain
shelter from the sun
hide from the rain
mass of unemployment
faces show the strain
we're all in the picture
we're all in the game

everything I give to you
everything I need from you
everything I want from you
everything you know is true
everything I give to you
everything I need from you
everything I want from you
everything you know is true

If I could give you a whole new world
to see the stars this night
I'd take away your fears tomorrow
and fill your heart's delight

the love you give me
drives me insane
throw away the key
and feel no pain
flashes in my mind
engraved in my brain
we're all in the picture
we're all in the game

everything I give to you
everything I need from you
everything I want from you
everything you know is true
everything I give to you
everything I need from you
everything I want from you
everything you know is true


The face I give you
Is always the same
threatned by fear
blinded by gain
be under no illusion
feel the pain
we're all in the picture
we're all in the game

we're all in the picture
we're all in the game
we're all in the picture
we're all in the game

Here's the music I have so far DECEPTION


I managed to dig up the original for a vocal guide .. HERE This is just for time guides, you can sing any style or melody you want to it.

So, who's in?

I have everything on seperate tracks so I can bounce you a mix of whatever you need like drums n bass line for the guitarists, vocalists should get by with what's already there.

Let's make some music!
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I'll have a go at some soloing for ya! :)
 
LemonTree said:
That was fast! :eek: :D
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Cool, looks like Gorty is all over the guitar, I'll focus on working some cool yet emotional vocals... and who knows, maybe they'll end up being cool yet emotional :D I have a good feeling bout' this one...
 
true-eurt said:
Your guitaring far from sucks Lemon...lI think you do some kick butt playin' on this tune.... :) :cool:
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Hahahahahaha...I just read this, and it sounds like I said that your tune far from sucks lemons!!! Which is okay too, cuz it doesn't suck lemons!!! :D
 
true-eurt said:
Hahahahahaha...I just read this, and it sounds like I said that your tune far from sucks lemons!!! Which is okay too, cuz it doesn't suck lemons!!! :D
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It's been a while since this old lemon was sucked :o
 
SnakeDog5050 said:
Cool, looks like Gorty is all over the guitar, I'll focus on working some cool yet emotional vocals... and who knows, maybe they'll end up being cool yet emotional :D I have a good feeling bout' this one...
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Hey SnakeDude, Do some of your guitaring too man....!!!
 
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