guitars are very piercing, sounds like a lot in the high mid-high range or something. If you didn't I would have rolled off some highs with your tone controll and used amp eq to make it fuller sounding. Needs more low mid fullness, less high mid harshness. It could just be the amp though.
Cymbals are very piercing also, but you didn't record them. If you boosted the highs on them i'd take that down. Left overhead is a lot louder than the right, and the snare seems to be coming more from the left side, which is a little disconcerting because the ride is . Overall the cymbals sound phasy and probably needed to be played with more control and less volume, especially with how frequently they are hit. Again you didn't record drums so phasy-ness and the performance is not your fault. The rest of the drums sounds good, the tom and snare are good, if not a touch too reverby for my tastes.
Don't try to mix things to sound hi-fi, mix to make things sound believable. Get things to blend together in a way that you believe in the emotion conveyed by the performance. Don't focus on individual sounds, focus on the song as a whole.
