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me-crazy-ac
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review one of my diddys
Pleas give me your tips/thoughts on this mp3.... be honest i can take it
Pleas give me your tips/thoughts on this mp3.... be honest i can take it
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me-crazy-ac
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ok lemme have it, im ready lol
jake-owa
Banned
Cool! I like this. It's a yokel type country tune but nice.
The drums are the weakest part of this mix.
Could use a way hotter lead...some of it is kinda out of timing but that's probably due to the boring drum track.
Nice easy song though.
Gets a bit long for me...but I'm easy to bore.
The drums are the weakest part of this mix.
Could use a way hotter lead...some of it is kinda out of timing but that's probably due to the boring drum track.
Nice easy song though.
Gets a bit long for me...but I'm easy to bore.
groucho
Member
Aw yeah, just dump the drum track altogether. Everything else sounds good and I'd rather hear it with no drums than with *those* drums.
I mean, I'm no one to talk, since I use crappy drum loops all the time, but still...
The bg vox sound a little, uh, "phaser-ish" or something. Bad mp3? Autotune? All in my head?
Nice singing and good song.
Chris
I mean, I'm no one to talk, since I use crappy drum loops all the time, but still...
The bg vox sound a little, uh, "phaser-ish" or something. Bad mp3? Autotune? All in my head?
Nice singing and good song.
Chris
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me-crazy-ac
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thx for the tips and feedback guys. They are sucky ass canned drums, but I am getting ready to put live drums in so that should help.
any tips on auto tune?
any tips on auto tune?
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me-crazy-ac
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anymore input?
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TripleM
Well-known member
Nice peaceful song. I liked the backing vocals. I thought they were well done.
The lead vocal was good, but I wonder if it can be improved upon. It was a little bit hot I thought. Maybe pull it back a bit. It seems to occupy a lot of space, but I don't suppose that's necessarily a problem. A little pitchiness here and there (e.g., the word "miss" at 2:28). I think there are a few other spots like that. If you can punch them, I would. Maybe belt out a section here and there. I'm sure your voice is capable. I'm not sure if they were double tracked it would sound better or not. Might be worth a try.
I guess the drums weren't the best, but that kind of stuff has never bothered me.
My thoughts. Trip...
The lead vocal was good, but I wonder if it can be improved upon. It was a little bit hot I thought. Maybe pull it back a bit. It seems to occupy a lot of space, but I don't suppose that's necessarily a problem. A little pitchiness here and there (e.g., the word "miss" at 2:28). I think there are a few other spots like that. If you can punch them, I would. Maybe belt out a section here and there. I'm sure your voice is capable. I'm not sure if they were double tracked it would sound better or not. Might be worth a try.
I guess the drums weren't the best, but that kind of stuff has never bothered me.
My thoughts. Trip...