You Were My All - mix help?

[pasqualy]

I recorded this new song over the past few days. i just feel like the mix isnt right but cant pin-point what im doing wrong. any help please?

www.purevolume.com/jordibarlowproduced - ( the song you were my all )

 

[DavidK]

Its seems like a good song. There is too much treble, try some high cuts and boost the bass (or rewrite the bass). Its unbalanced, too much on the top frequencies and not enough bottom.