I like the guitar part on the left. The tone is cool too.
Some pitchiness on the first line? On the words "burn" and "hate". The same line later in the song sounded OK. There were a few other notes sound a little flat.
I thought the drums were OK. A couple of turnovers sounded a little canned. But mostly, they were OK.
Maybe tame the mid-2Ks on the guitar solo just a bit?