You Lie

Was waiting for the smoking lead solo just saying. With or without sounds pretty good
Finally!
Now we're actually talkin'bout songwriting lol (y)

I kinda' feel like guitar solos have become gratuitous... Besides, I'll never be Joe Satriani.

This is short though... Would be real easy to squeeze a little something in 8-)
 
Finally!
Now we're actually talkin'bout songwriting lol (y)

I kinda' feel like guitar solos have become gratuitous... Besides, I'll never be Joe Satriani.

This is short though... Would be real easy to squeeze a little something in 8-)
The song is a little plaintive or even angry lyrically as you take us through the different scenarios throughout. You could get away with a pretty edgy solo to further emphasize what you’re saying. Doesn’t need to be a lot of notes
Uh just suggestions though.
 
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That has that Days of the New, "Touch, Peel, Stand", sound.

Really clean sound. I would bring the vocals to the same level as the guitar. I like how you have the separation. Other than some production opinions (and they are just that), really good recording.
 
That has that Days of the New, "Touch, Peel, Stand", sound.

Really clean sound. I would bring the vocals to the same level as the guitar. I like how you have the separation. Other than some production opinions (and they are just that), really good recording.
HA! Love that song!
Drop-D with a piezo... Yep (y)
 
Drums are a bit canned sounding but do the job.

Nice song. Reminds me a bit of Sound Garden, some of the singing especially is similar to Cornell.

Is this you singing or synth v? Excellent singing whatever the case.

EL
 
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