You got me doing this song

  • Thread starter Thread starter Irwin abrigo
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Uhm...

The beat is cool. Not my style, but it's cool.

The vocals are a no go.

You have a different accent for a rap style.

your flow isn't where it needs to be

theres no intro, or outro, it just kinda starts, and just kinda ends...

ehhhh... Needs lots of work, in my opinion.

Keep bangin' though, don't give up.

--Re-Lapse
 
I hate to be mean but my ears hurt now.

Agreeing with Lapse on this one, except on the fact he ain't tryin to rap. Beat...eh not something I would rock, but hey to each his own.

Vocals....eh see the beginning of this post. The mix is horrible and I doubt you want to use those vocals on this beat. AaronGeorge said Michael Jackson. This is the MJ after he had to sell Neverland and give up his addiction to small boys asses right? And btw YES HE DID THAT...Like Katt Williams said "Nobody says the same shit about you for 20 years."

Anyway, back on topic I would take this one back to square one and piece it together. You might be able to start from just the beat and get lucky but I would invest in a more professional mic and some mixing skills homie.

Fiev.

Edit: All the other stuff on your soundclick has MUCH better mix than this song. Go get that mic back.
 
Fieva said:
This is the MJ after he had to sell Neverland and give up his addiction to small boys asses right? And btw YES HE DID THAT...Like Katt Williams said "Nobody says the same shit about you for 20 years."



Fiev.
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You OK, buddy?
 
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