You Get me Right

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Maybe its the vibe you're going for, but I do think the vocals could use a bit more clarity. I know that vocal style doesn't really call for it, but it feels a bit stuff at times.

Also, the vocals don't really sound "analog", they sound very modern and precise, especially the backup vocals.
 
Sounds great, but they're are 400 other artist who sound exactly the same. Might try to distinguish yourself with a more original style.
Cheers
 
It does sound very good. Vocals are really well done. But I have to also sadly agree, while it is good, there isn't much to make it sound different from everyone else. With such a good vocal and apparently good production skills, it seems you could now stretch yourself and go for, away from the rest.

Mad skills, good over all tune.
 
Scream and make your voice heard! This is not the way. Its perfect but boring. Scream!
 
mowtontom2 said:
Sounds great, but they're are 400 other artist who sound exactly the same. Might try to distinguish yourself with a more original style.
Cheers
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Sadly, that's a fact of life these days. There seem to be two types of songs that are popular today, the ballad like this, or the straight up rap with no melody. Of the two, I'll take this. In this style you have Tate McRae, Dua Lipa, Billie Eilish and a host of others.

Subvibe has quite a few good tunes with the smooth quiet vocals and decent melodies. Vocal work is generally really good. It's a shame that someone hasn't picked them up for promotion. I guess you need to put some videos with music to get people to pay attention these days.
 
Hi @TalismanRich
thanks for your comment.. basically i d these songs for fun
someone else also suggested a video , It would be wonderful but i haven't a clue where
to start & the budget would be high unless a student would do it for experience
none the less a good Tip THX

subvibe
 
subvibe said:
Hi @TalismanRich
thanks for your comment.. basically i d these songs for fun
someone else also suggested a video , It would be wonderful but i haven't a clue where
to start & the budget would be high unless a student would do it for experience
none the less a good Tip THX

subvibe
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Hey Subvibe. I listened twice. Is that your singing? Playing keys? If that’s your voice it’s very nice. When I listen to a song first thing I am looking for is does it make me feel something and I dig the vibe for its genre. Only two cents I would add is I would be curious to hear the vocal have a bit less effect and somewhere a strong break either picking up the energy hearing you push it vocally and then bring it way down exit out. Well done
 
Hi @keano12

thanks for listening & your comments
no its not me singing But everything else is me


subvibe
 
First, you are at a high level. I'm about to blather on but there are wonderful sounds in there.

I quickly listened to a bunch of your stuff on Apple music, mostly what I'd call Industrial Techno with no vocals, sounds great. I landed on a song called "Mindflayer" and gave it more than 30 secs, so that's 1 stream at least :). Mindflayer has some super cockiness (drop at :58) which I think You Get Me Right could use a little of. As people note YGMR has a Lauv flavor but it's not sharply differentiated.

IMHO: "you get me right" is the coolest lyric. It sounds like the chorus, but plays right up top (setting an awesome mood and tone) and then is gone until 2:26, which to me is too long. JENNIE recently used the old "don't bore us...." phrase at 1:05 here

and because "you get me right" is good I want to hear it again! The "give you my love" section sounds like a pre-chorus, it repeats but then doesn't lead to a chorus, which at some level is frustrating me.

It's worth thinking about Mindflayer's drops and changes, and being maybe a little more intentional about building the intensity of YGMR through production. Maybe some of the other lyrics can be tweaked to stay on theme ("you get me right, you get me on the line, you get me in your sights and you got me more than fine")? From a build/change up pov when you have 2 voices at 1:22 that is different and cool, really sounds great, but maybe it should be coming out of a traditional 2nd chorus to help make this emotional journey even more intense?

Don't be afraid to put something, a countermelody using a buzz saw through a xylophone sample or something rad, to accent or help build the lyrical intensity. A unique instrument could deepen some section of what you have... which is very strong. If you keep following this muse on this or maybe a few more songs IMO law of averages says soon you will reach an undeniable banger. Thanks for letting me listen to this.
 
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