Wrote a song about getting older

[jeffguitar]

I always have trouble with mixing and song structure. This is about losing options as you get older until you wonder if you are in control of your own path or if your path is now controlling you. i hate my own voice, jeez

I hear so many good recordings and songs here so I feel a bit embarrassed. hope you like

 

[spantini]

Your voice is fine, it gets stronger as you go. The song drags out a bit - the last 1:30 is really long as the song stands now but some added instruments could fill it out some. The mix is pretty good but the instrument in the right channel just seems to drone on from start to finish. I imagine a fiddle with more movement in spots at a slightly lower volume.