Writer's block - a short ...errr...poem

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Fat_Satchel

I suffer Narcoleptic Rage
I dont usually write poetry, but the muse came upon me this morn and I ended up with this...not bad, not great...its done...not changin it hehe

Later!

Writer's block

I sit and stare into the air.
I know there are words out there, in the air.
I see them swirling about my periphery.
So I reach out to them but they disappear.
And I’m left with just and echo of the words I hear.
Steadily fading and not at all clear.
I try to grasp the task of writing down random thoughts
But I’m too busy organizing them.
By size and color and personal costs.
To assure myself they won’t get lost.
The ones that come taste bitter and stale.
They leave me short, that feeling Ive failed.
Even this, my angry reprise is lacking a feel.
“Give me honesty!” it patiently cries.
“There is none.” I say.
 
Hey! That ain't half shabby Fat!


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JIC.......you weren't raised in the 60's that means I think it's good!
 
Liked it. Would love to see-- So I lie! at the end, lol. Hey it would fit.

Don't change a thing ..except I couldn't here it?? ;-)
 
ONEsnowRIDER said:
...Don't change a thing ..except I couldn't here it?? ;-)

Ack!! you mean like put music to it??? Hmmm...The Writer's Block song...wonder what I did w that ukalale

hehe...thanks guys!

LS
 
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