World of Tiers (original work)

JeremyPLS

JeremyPLS

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Greetings from this new member.

I write mostly instrumental music - rock (prog and jazz influences).

I recorded this track at the beginning of lockdown and originally entitled “Lockdown Lethargy” it ground to a halt at 1.5 minutes.
Now extended it becomes a bit more optimistic by the end.

I hope you like it


World of Tiers
Lockdown Lethargy 1.jpg
 
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Can't say it's bad - but there seems to be a ramshackleness to the piece - but the various instruments all fit - but kind of a willy nilly way.
 
No time to listen right now, but the name caught my eye - did you mean 'World of Tiers' (as in the Philip Jose Farmer series of books)?
 
mjbphotos said:
No time to listen right now, but the name caught my eye - did you mean 'World of Tiers' (as in the Philip Jose Farmer series of books)?
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Yes, I borrowed the name!
At the time, during lockdown, we were on different "teirs" in the UK, so it seemed appropriate.
(I tried to reread the book recently, but gave up)

I tried to write C***d above, but it is not allowed?
 
JeremyPLS said:
Yes, I borrowed the name!
At the time, during lockdown, we were on different "teirs" in the UK, so it seemed appropriate.
(I tried to reread the book recently, but gave up)

I tried to write C***d above, but it is not allowed?
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Then you should spell it correctly! T-I-E-R-S

Mix seems ok, drums are a bit lost in the background. Switching the melody line over between instruments seems a bit random and when there are 2 sax parts they don't really compliment each other. Very long fade-out.
 
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