The second line
Hi, I'm still not sure I understand the Time/thieves thing. The first line, however, is set. You nailed the right word (green, with its relation to seeds in the word "just" that you used before with trees, but which here has more power implied: good job).
Where do you steal time from? Do you do that when you are "green" or do you waste it and spend it haphazardly. I'd like to know what you mean there.
MH