"Winter Eyes" lyrics by Icystorm

[MelancholyGirl]

Hi I made up my own song using the lyrics by Icystorm, another online friend helped create a better track than the one I had..I believe another member here also made his own version using Icy's lyrics.
https://www.box.com/shared/cmazfaf1r0pqihkqm8jp

 

[rayc]

The intro is cery Eurodisco - interesting. The drums clear that up soon enough - maybe a little too adamantly.
The effects laden voice part - you need to either raise the vocal or lower some of the backing as it because almost unintelligible.
Good song, the melody is fine the arrangement is good just needs a tweak or 2 to get the voclas on top in some parts and to tame those drums a bit.
Good lyrics Joseph.