Will You Hum This All Day??

[Village Idiot]

Trying to write the ultimate pop hook song.

Any 2 cents on the lyrics/mix/musicianship would be very mucho appreciated, as we will be re-recording it as needed be.

Thanks for any opinions!


VI

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[TexRoadkill]

The song has potential. If you want honesty... The vocals need quite a bit of work. The sound isnt bad but there are a lot of flat notes in there. The electric sounds like it needs to be tuned.

The drums sounded very good. Very crisp. The acoustic sounded good also.

The production is close but the vocals and guitar need to be redone if you want the song to sound it's best.

 

[Nutdotnet]

Would I hum this? Nope.

Not saying this isn't a good song, would have been a great song 30 years ago or so, but it is TOO POPPY for today's world.

I like the song though, gotta love them shallow women.

 

[Fangar]

I agree...please tune it.

Fangar