
bozmillar
New member
I just finished this song about 15 min ago. My biggest problem is that I am horrible at writing lyrics and melodies. I'm not sure why. I turn retarded as soon as I try to come up with something good.
So here's the instrumental version. I know it's a bit long for it's style. I have long song syndrome. I plan to take out one of the choruses at the end, and a few measures from one of the verses. Hopefully that should bring it down to the right length.
Anyways, who wants to take a crack at a melody line for me? I'll include you in the credits of every movie that features this song and pay great royalties.
And the usual, tell me what sucks about this recording.
So here's the instrumental version. I know it's a bit long for it's style. I have long song syndrome. I plan to take out one of the choruses at the end, and a few measures from one of the verses. Hopefully that should bring it down to the right length.
Anyways, who wants to take a crack at a melody line for me? I'll include you in the credits of every movie that features this song and pay great royalties.
And the usual, tell me what sucks about this recording.