Who is I am? - Sonar colab

[CPFC1985]

Hi all, so I got involved in my first colab on the Cakewalk forums, credit must also go to ThePogue (Tom) and Paulo on that forum for their input, moved the song on massively from when I posted my first version on this forum.

Interested to hear your thoughts:

https://soundcloud.com/damien_kelly/who-is-i-am

 

[PDP]

Nice effort to do something a bit different, the guitar that comes in at 1:20 is very scratchy, I'd go with something smoother. The big chorus part that comes in at 2:45 is too distorted for my tastes, into digital clipping there. Overall its a cool piece, I enjoyed listening to it.

 

[DM60]

Good tune, I had trouble understanding the words on the front end, I think they are relevant enough you may want to sculpt them to cut through a bit better. I agree with the above statement on the chorus. Work that out a little. Everything else really seemed well recorded and a really good tune.

Nice effort.