Fat_Satchel
I suffer Narcoleptic Rage
This has been thru several rewrites in the last few days and its gone in a few different directions along the way, all based around a couple lines. Its a fairly upbeat rhythym...somewhere around 120bpm...havent clicked it out yet, starting in C.
Imagine Greenday meets Dashboard confessional I guess...something like that lol
I think it still needs a bridge...its a bit short, even with some judicious chorus repeats at the end.
Lemme know what ya think. Cant wait till I can post some clips again...stewpyd enternit!
Whiskey whispers...err...or something...
VERSE:
She looked like smoke and mirrors
Tracing shadows on my mind
Her lace and diamond-hard appearance
Was just a sign of the times
She liked to wear the bright lights
The ones I kept turning down
She’s every sad song that I’ve ever known
Hell, that’s what kept me coming round
CHORUS:
Oh I’m faceless
She’s so hard to find
The whiskey whispers in my mind
I’m so wasted
She don’t have the time
The whiskey whispers in my mind
VERSE:
She said that she loved me
From the first time that we met
Now we’re just feeding the hunger
Of living life with no regrets
Though I don’t always miss her
I still wait for her to call
After all she is one of a kind
And it’s not that far to fall
CHORUS:
Oh I’m faceless
She’s so hard to find
The whiskey whispers in my mind
I’m so wasted
She don’t have the time
The whiskey whispers in my mind
Copyright © 2003 by Matt Brosnan
Imagine Greenday meets Dashboard confessional I guess...something like that lol
I think it still needs a bridge...its a bit short, even with some judicious chorus repeats at the end.
Lemme know what ya think. Cant wait till I can post some clips again...stewpyd enternit!
Whiskey whispers...err...or something...
VERSE:
She looked like smoke and mirrors
Tracing shadows on my mind
Her lace and diamond-hard appearance
Was just a sign of the times
She liked to wear the bright lights
The ones I kept turning down
She’s every sad song that I’ve ever known
Hell, that’s what kept me coming round
CHORUS:
Oh I’m faceless
She’s so hard to find
The whiskey whispers in my mind
I’m so wasted
She don’t have the time
The whiskey whispers in my mind
VERSE:
She said that she loved me
From the first time that we met
Now we’re just feeding the hunger
Of living life with no regrets
Though I don’t always miss her
I still wait for her to call
After all she is one of a kind
And it’s not that far to fall
CHORUS:
Oh I’m faceless
She’s so hard to find
The whiskey whispers in my mind
I’m so wasted
She don’t have the time
The whiskey whispers in my mind
Copyright © 2003 by Matt Brosnan