What do you think of these songs?

[brickstone]

I would like to know how I could improve them and what you think of them. They are really rough recordings . I would like comments on lyric and music quality. Thanks in advance !!!!!

http://www.myspace.com/rockwontstop

 

[random.hero]

good music, pretty simple and i like it, but you may want to clean up the mix a little

 

[brickstone]

thanks for the comments!!! it only took me like two hours on a four track tape recorder so I probably need to put alot more time into it to but thanks!!!!

 

[chadman15]

loved it. it really groves and fits well together.