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bweston
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rayc
retroreprobate
Mate - lots of potential. The horn samples are pretty awful & there's a lot of noise in the recording too.
Song, voice and guitar are good.
Work on them.
You'd also be well served to introduce yourself by listening to and commenting on the work of others in the clinic. Considered & constructive criticism/praise/commentary will garner trust and response.
Until then - get down, get back up again!
Song, voice and guitar are good.
Work on them.
You'd also be well served to introduce yourself by listening to and commenting on the work of others in the clinic. Considered & constructive criticism/praise/commentary will garner trust and response.
Until then - get down, get back up again!
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StevenJacksonMu
New member
I agree lots of potential, you have a great soulful voice this is what I pick up from these snippets.
YouTube - Goodbye (To You My Friend)
YouTube - Goodbye (To You My Friend)
jeffmaher
New member
Voice is killer great. Performance, and recorded. Jeez...love to have you front my band...if I had one.
Anfontan
Banned by eurt
Your soulful voice is shining through but the noise and instrumentation is sure holding it back. Are the backing tracks a midi instrument of some kind?
You should try to colab with some other members and get some killer tracks for you to sing to.
You should try to colab with some other members and get some killer tracks for you to sing to.
CFox
Banned
Great voice.
Horn samples need to be replaced. They are not even good in a cheesy way. I think samplitude is still offering a free sample set with their free sample player ( and it includes brass ).
The guitar on the first track sounds too sterile, lifeless and looped. Is it a sample ? Can you get someone to play it for at least 8 bars then chop it up ? Also, it would benefit from some stereo reverb.
The grainy sounding recording, is that due to a heavy handed application of iZotopes Free plugin Vinyl ?
Horn samples need to be replaced. They are not even good in a cheesy way. I think samplitude is still offering a free sample set with their free sample player ( and it includes brass ).
The guitar on the first track sounds too sterile, lifeless and looped. Is it a sample ? Can you get someone to play it for at least 8 bars then chop it up ? Also, it would benefit from some stereo reverb.
The grainy sounding recording, is that due to a heavy handed application of iZotopes Free plugin Vinyl ?
ido1957
9K Gold Member
Nice soulful voice - definitely as you say "vintage soul rnb.
Welcome and I hope you'll a) share your recording details b) share your thoughts on others' work here.
Welcome and I hope you'll a) share your recording details b) share your thoughts on others' work here.
aaronmcoleman
The truth is out there!
Voice sounds good, levels sound good, and playing sounds good. but all of the live instruments guitar, bass, drums all sound like they are muffled. cool song though.
PoeticIntensity
MagicJones.com (is a website)
Wow. Yeah.. Your vocals are top-notch. Recordings don't do your voice justice in the least, but your vocals shiiiiine.... Your website tells me you're in SLC? If so, we've gotta get together, man. My studio is just an hour south of you.
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JakJak
New member
Great vocals mate,
I have to agree, the synthesised horn is pretty bad.
But that can be easily improved.
I have to agree, the synthesised horn is pretty bad.
But that can be easily improved.
joeym
New member
Nice voice, man.....Marvin Gaye your favorite?
Sparse production though.
Sparse production though.