Hey Mr. Murphy. This is a very clean recording.
Guitar is excellent. Sounds like a Martin, so if it's not, just humor me (little white lies are okay here). Your voice is also excellent. Well, not much else to compliment outside of the vocals and the guitar, eh? LOL...when the first 3 chords were played, I thought it was "House Of The Rising Sun."
Since this is under 2:00 minutes, I think a little instrumental break with a tastey acoustic lead just off melody might be cool. I dunno'...just an idea.
My only other suggestion relates to the doubling of the vocal. I double vocals sometimes to thicken them up a bit, but I don't like it when the doubling is so obvious...and it honestly kinda' stuck out to me at the beginning. It's fine once the harmony vocals come in, and I'm a big fan of doubling backups. But for the lead, I'd either pull one of them down a little in the mix (they sound like they're both at about the same level, and they're competing), or maybe a little more verb to kinda' "glue" them together a bit. My vote is for the volume adjustment.
Or, you could hold off on the doubling until all the voices come in, b/c you don't really need it at the beginning...IMHO (<--- I have no idea what that acronym means, but I always see people type that right after they dish out some negative comment).
Thanks for posting this. If you change it, let me know.