Too much room or reverb, just not good there. The kick needs way more balls. Also the cymbals are very harsh, if you're boosting eq stop, try cutting it instead and get rid of some of the ear piercing sound. How are you micing the kit, and what kind of mics are you using? It sounds like you're on your way but it still needs a lot of work, practice mixing the drums within an entire mix, it becomes very different than mixing just the drums alone.